Little-Renastair's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[VZ Series:Naruto V Sasuke]

Okay

It wasn't too bad in terms of putting the sprites together to work and the sound was mostly decent quality but it could have been better. The layout was probably not so good though, the text was most of the time hard to read, you could improve that by having a solid colour for the text to be on and a simple font, nothing fancy, fancy is often hard to read.

At times some of the images seemed to be streached, like the background, that looked streached to me. Though the use of animations from the anime, although cheating did kind of work, so thats one slightly good point. The choice of endings was a good idea and the replay going back to the choice screen.

One other thing I will mention, the flicking back and forth on the sprite faces doesn't really work because it looks very pixilated. But otherwise, not too bad.

2/5

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mortis5000 responds:

Thank but I don't understand what you mean when you say..."Though the use of animations from the anime, although cheating did kind of work, so thats one slightly good point. ", please explain...

[3D Animation Test]

Bleh

Yeah okay, the artwork looks good and the animation is also very nice, though a little slow. There isn't really much else here though, no sound or anything really worth watching, so it has no real entertainment value, I'm not really a big fan of watching peoples tests on Newgrounds. I would suggest uploading it to a host then posting a topic in the flash section for test feedback.

It might be nice to see what you can do with this though, you could have had some short clips with interaction between scenes, give them a background and everything, just to look nice. Otherwise it's nothing more than a test, good luck with other works.

0/5

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[Chalk Adventure]

Alright

Well the idea was pretty good, the sounds and everything where also pretty good to hear and everything seemed to fit well, though I might question the choice of music to this. It obviously sounds and looks like it took a lot of time to do, I could never be patiant enought to do 10 frames, let alone the ammount you did.

This didn't really seem to have much direction to it, the one major thing I would suggested is planning, much of this seemed to come across as being more random than anything. Just needs direction is all, more of a story behind what's going on or events that work from the last to the next.

4/5

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Graeme responds:

Questioning the music choice is the last thing I expected to hear.
I guess it's not for everyone, but I think it's a beautiful piece of piano. I think piano will be a central theme in my chalk movies.

I honestly did plan this one. Haha. I know it seems random, but I had a plan.
butterfly flies in (past flower)
transforms into blah blah blah.
that turns into this, falls ___ direction.

It's an awkward thing to plan out a movie with no story, but I did still. Haha.
I will try to work around a more solid plot next time

[Street Fighter Series pt2]

Alright

Well a good point to this is that you had sound effects that did work with the animations, so that's pretty good to note. I didn't like how in parts you have things strech over, that didn't look too good and the diolog box could have been done a little better in my opinion. The main plot for this was hard to follow after a while, it just got kind of repetitive.

This could be good to watch for someone who is intrested in mindless fighting with a bit of diolog, but it's not really to my taste, so sorry about that. The lava below the part where they are fighting could be done better, as it is, it just looks like the platform they are on is floating.

2/5

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mortis5000 responds:

Thank You for your review...I must admit that I seen my architectural mistake at the very last minute and couldn't change it...the camera that I was using did cause distortion in some places in the flash...I'm still trying to figure that out.